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I have a question about this chapter, the debugger section has "les boutons du bouton « Next »," which doesn't quite work in French, but it's because the English original has a similar awkward repetition. Happy to clean it up in French regardless, or wait until the English gets a pass. |
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Review of the French translation of Mise en route
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"Le paquet Python de base" didn't read naturally and slightly obscured the meaning; rephrased around "installation."
Before:
Le [paquet Python de base](https://www.python.org/downloads/) est facile à installer mais *n'est pas* ce que vous devriez choisir pour ces cours.After:
[L'installation de base de Python](https://www.python.org/downloads/) est facile à réaliser, mais *ce n'est pas* ce que vous devriez choisir pour ces cours."au lieu du Enter" doesn't actually work grammatically in French ("du" can't take "Enter" like that); added "la touche" to fix it.
Before:
appuyez sur \Shift-Enter` au lieu du `Enter` habituel.`After:
appuyez sur \Shift-Enter` au lieu de la touche `Enter` habituelle.`Agreement error — "lesquels" is masculine but it's referring back to "complétions," which is feminine plural.
Before:
...plusieurs complétions possibles parmi lesquels choisir.After:
...plusieurs complétions possibles parmi lesquelles choisir."fait gagner de la frappe" is a literal calque of the English that doesn't really mean anything in French; rewrote it to say what it actually means.
Before:
...vous fait aussi gagner de la frappe.After:
...vous évite également d'avoir à tout taper."la partie inférieure divisée" is a confusing word-for-word rendering of "the split lower pane." "Panneau inférieur" is the term already used elsewhere in the translation, so this just brings it in line.
Before:
Cliquer en haut à droite de la partie inférieure divisée ferme l'aide en ligne.After:
Cliquer en haut à droite du panneau inférieur ferme l'aide en ligne."Plus d'instructions peuvent être trouvées" is a passive construction straight out of English; French reads more naturally in the active voice here.
Before:
Plus d'instructions peuvent être trouvées sur la [page de la bibliothèque]...After:
Vous trouverez davantage d'instructions sur la [page de la bibliothèque]..."Ceci" is vague where "cette commande" makes it clear what's being referred to.
Before:
Ceci écrit la ligne \print("foobar")` dans un fichier appelé `foo.py` dans le répertoire local.`After:
Cette commande écrit la ligne \print("foobar")` dans un fichier appelé `foo.py` dans le répertoire local.`"courbe d'apprentissage verticale" is a direct translation of "steep learning curve" that just doesn't land in French; "très raide" is the expression people actually use.
Before:
...une courbe d'apprentissage apparemment verticale ainsi que de longues journées...After:
...une courbe d'apprentissage apparemment très raide ainsi que de longues journées...Standardized capitalization for "Unicode" and "HTML," following normal French typographic convention for proper nouns and acronyms.
Before:
Python prend en charge l'[unicode](https://docs.python.org/3/howto/unicode.html),.../...des représentations html **statiques**.After:
Python prend en charge l'[Unicode](https://docs.python.org/3/howto/unicode.html),.../...des représentations HTML **statiques**.